From 3515cbf75f1ef50e526b947b86fc6110054c2bc0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Zarkonnen Date: Wed, 10 Jul 2013 20:50:42 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Removed mentions of "you". --- script/events/room.js | 19 +++++++++++-------- script/events/setpieces.js | 12 +++++------- 2 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/script/events/room.js b/script/events/room.js index d88ca44..246ff06 100644 --- a/script/events/room.js +++ b/script/events/room.js @@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ Events.Room = [ scales: { reward: { scales: 20 }, text: [ - 'the beggar thanks you.', + 'the beggar expresses his thanks.', 'leaves a pile of small scales behind.' ], buttons: { @@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ Events.Room = [ teeth: { reward: { teeth: 20 }, text: [ - 'the beggar thanks you.', + 'the beggar expresses his thanks.', 'leaves a pile of small teeth behind.' ], buttons: { @@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ Events.Room = [ cloth: { reward: { cloth: 20 }, text: [ - 'the beggar thanks you.', + 'the beggar expresses his thanks.', 'leaves some scraps of cloth behind.' ], buttons: { @@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ Events.Room = [ 'start': { text: [ "a man hobbles up, coughing.", - "he begs you for medicine." + "he begs for medicine." ], notification: 'a sick man hobbles up', buttons: { @@ -531,7 +531,8 @@ Events.Room = [ }, 'alloy': { text: [ - "the man thanks you and gives you a reward.", + "the man is thankful.", + 'he leaves a reward.', 'some weird metal he picked up on his travels.' ], onLoad: function() { @@ -546,7 +547,8 @@ Events.Room = [ }, 'cells': { text: [ - "the man thanks you and gives you a reward.", + "the man is thankful.", + 'he leaves a reward.', 'some weird glowing boxes he picked up on his travels.' ], onLoad: function() { @@ -561,7 +563,8 @@ Events.Room = [ }, 'scales': { text: [ - "the man thanks you and gives you a reward.", + "the man is thankful.", + 'he leaves a reward.', 'all he has are some scales.' ], onLoad: function() { @@ -576,7 +579,7 @@ Events.Room = [ }, 'nothing': { text: [ - "the man thanks you and hobbles off." + "the man expresses his thanks and hobbles off." ], buttons: { 'bye': { diff --git a/script/events/setpieces.js b/script/events/setpieces.js index a4b676c..79681a4 100644 --- a/script/events/setpieces.js +++ b/script/events/setpieces.js @@ -1150,7 +1150,7 @@ Events.Setpieces = { }, 'end5': { text: [ - 'you search the clinic and find some medicine abandoned in the drawers.' + 'some medicine abandoned in the drawers.' ], onLoad: function() { World.clearDungeon(); @@ -2174,7 +2174,7 @@ Events.Setpieces = { }, 'd10': { - notification: 'as you prise open the door, a deformed figure awakes and attacks.', + notification: 'behind the door, a deformed figure awakes and attacks.', combat: true, enemy: 'deformed', char: 'D', @@ -2608,7 +2608,7 @@ Events.Setpieces = { 'end11': { text: [ - 'at the end of a hallway you find a pristine medicine cabinet.', + 'a pristine medicine cabinet at the end of a hallway.', "the rest of the hospital is empty." ], onLoad: function() { @@ -2691,8 +2691,7 @@ Events.Setpieces = { 'end13': { text: [ 'the tentacular horror is defeated.', - 'you wade into the operating theatre.', - 'the remains of its victims are everywhere.' + 'inside, the remains of its victims are everywhere.' ], onLoad: function() { World.clearDungeon(); @@ -2736,8 +2735,7 @@ Events.Setpieces = { 'end14': { text: [ 'the warped man lies dead.', - 'you examine the operating theatre.', - 'a lot of curious equipment.' + 'the operating theatre has a lot of curious equipment.' ], onLoad: function() { World.clearDungeon();